Really enjoyed it :D Loved the POV :3

This story was made of win! I LOVED IT

Good story! Really cute and sexy at the same time!

A nice piece of work! Capable of fitting in with the cannon as well, though it stands alone quite well.

Your style of narration isn't my favorite, but despite that I was drawn in and enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing and I hope you keep writing!

SimplyWaters