Amazing.
Gave me goosebumps, and I usually hate poems.
Thank you for posting this up. (: I loved it.

This is amazing! I am totally in awe of your talent!

One word to describe this: Perfect.

I believe this is awesome Rika! Except for if I remember correctly that Daisy was his wife, not Myrtle. Myrtle was the woman that he had on the side whom he actually loved while Daisy was a scapegoat so that he could look "rich and famous". I think you may have mentioned that in a roundabout way, but I am not sure. Anyway, keep up the good work and looking forward to hear more from you!

CC.