omg! That was amazing! Well done! I love the descriptive details and the way they interact, totally something I could see him actually doing. But lol, a bow for Watson. Totally. say, when did he remove his hand? You never really say...but anyway, really good job with the characters! I shall have to look at more of your things for these two and any other couples that I enjoy if you've written them!

I...I like it very much.

Oh, that was brilliant. Well executed, HOT, and very funny at the end. Well done!

I love that little nod to Hank you have in there. Brilliant.

So hot! And perfect. I got a little distracted (in a good way) at a part in the middle 'cause "up down, strange charm, top bottom, if you don;t know what a quark is, it don't matter..." :) Amazing work!

LOVE this, esp the texts from Irene at the end. Well-written and funny!

Holy shit. That was...really hot. That's pretty much all I can say now. Very nice after the latest episode. It's almost...canon, really.

Oh, just wonderful! I'd love to read more from you, hopefully along these lines.

DFTBA

I can't even. This was perfectly characterised. I loved it. :) Please write more like this :')

:-D

Ahah! How fantastic. John just lets himself be oblivious, of course. Very well-executed, from the texts to the flaccidity and everything in between.

Quite good. Sherlock stayed impressively in character throughout.

my goodness, this was great.

awesome, I was soooo craving some John/Sherlock/Irene teaching him about his sexuality after the episode and it seems fandom provided once again XD

Sexy and funny! XD Loved Johns reaction - good one-shot.