Wow, this is a gripping and addictive series, if only the actual ingame storyline was this good!

I'm really liking the rising tension you have going on here. The addition of these new characters in the past few chapters have added some interesting new dimensions to the storyline, and I like the way you've been developing them so far, so keep it up. :)

I also wanted to say that I've noticed a bit of improvement in the flow of your dialogue, so congratulations on that. It seemed more natural in the last couple of chapters compared to earlier. It still needs work, but just keep at it.

Looking forward to the climax.

Real good chapter and I must say that was really intense.
I hope Spyro is okay because I hold him close to my heart and can't wait for the next chapter.

very good i loved it and your stories/story are/is great im not the best judge seeing how i finished chapter 1 on my story rising shadow but i liked your story

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I love this story u should write another

nice chapter I like the way you had the parents of the three dragons overeact about how they thought the guardians did it, any way good job on the chapter, cant wait for your next update.

This is a really amazing chapter.

I have to give you kudos for your gesture in crafting a violence-free, memorial-themed chapter in the wake of that bombing. It's a classy move, and I think it fits the situation well. Nice.

I do feel that you're still overdoing it on the exclamation marks I'm afraid. Exclamation marks are supposed to be used as points of emphasis the way I see it. Not only do they tell the reader that a character is shouting or surprised, but they give a line intensity. If they're over-used, though, they lose that quality of emphasis and the dialogue begins to suffer from feeling over the top and unrealistic instead.

Also, just a minor nit-pick, but it goes along with the same point in that you used exclamation marks instead of question marks in a couple of places, such as right at the very end where Spyro says: "Are you sure you're only eight years old!"

So, try and use those exclamation points more sparingly, and I feel that it will really help the quality of the writing.

Now, for the content of the chapter itself, I just want to say that I'm very intrigued by this development of Cynder's new power. Does this mean that Cynder's natural power is that of a spirit dragon, and her other elements were all the result of her corruption? If so, it's a nice original direction to take compared to the many other writers (myself included) who label her as a Shadow dragon with only her other powers stemming from her corruption. If not, then it is still nice to see Cynder getting a new ability because again, that doesn't seem to happen most of the time, and I commend you for that.

All in all, good work, and I hope to see more soon. :)

I am glad you did this chapter like this, I was shocked to hear about what happened at the Boston Marathon, I hope they catch who ever did this and I hope he or she gets worst possible punishment for what he or she did! any way good chapter I hope you can update soon.

Dragonfly Park is truly touching. Some people say Sparx is just an annoying dragonfly but to me he's Spyro's brother,best friend,side kick and a true hero and he has a heart of gold.
I also love the bond between Spyro and his son it's turly a sight to behold and shows me that no matter what the will always stick by eachother as their bond,friendship and love for eachother continues to grow.

Great chapter and please update soon.
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That is an excellent chapter and now the fighting is beginning.

Please update soon.

This is so awesome bud I love these types of fic please update soon and good luck.

Cool chapter, I think the ONE is either Spyro, Malefor of Diamond, though I could be wrong, I cant wait to see The Dark Master get beat, want to help so badly, I really dont like that creature, he is evil to core, and...he gives shadow power users a bad name, Darkness its self is not evil, nor is light good they are simplely power that are used by any one who wants to, though Darkness is mainly used by villains and light mainly heroes that does not make them good or evil. oh well good chapter cant wait to see what happens next.

Wow I have to say that I'm impressed and I love these types of chapters.
Oh yeah I can't wait for the next chapter and I wish you good luck.