This is wonderfully artful. Would make just as much sense rewritten as a Labyrinth fanfiction.

So loved reading this it was a great little story, I wish there were more Legend fan-fiction stories. I really did like this version, to bad she didn't get to stay with him though. Have you thought of making a sequel where they are reunited. I hope to see more of your work :).

Loved it! Wel done you!

Thank you for posting this here. I came across it a few days ago on one of my usual legend related google searches and loved it. I am very infatuated with Lily's seduction and transformation and your depiction of it was much enjoyed.

It's just too bad she couldn't have stayed with darkness as his queen...