Iggy. I know how to use quotation marks but this story doesn't really have much dialog plus it's my dad's story. He wrote this in a notebook and told me to type it up and post it here. I didn't see any quotations marks in the story therefore there wasn't a need to put them in if the characters had actual lines and if there was a plot to this I would've give them each their own line. This story was based off of a dream my dad had there's no actual plot to this story I could try to fix this story if you want me to but where do I put the quotation marks at?

I understand that you didn't really get this story I didn't really care much for it anyway but I don't really know how to make sense of the story for you to understand. Anyway I might try to fix this story but no promises. I am currently busy with my Ed Edd n Eddy fanfics I might rewrite this story but no one seems to care for it so I don't know

Didn't understand a thing, sorry. I can forgive the typos and other words that seem out of place but please learn how to use "quotation marks" when showing dialogue.

Very interesting story. And this was all based on a dream? Wow

Neato perhaps :)