|Reviews for Going Home|
| Matfix 8/20/12 . chapter 1
Iggy. I know how to use quotation marks but this story doesn't really have much dialog plus it's my dad's story. He wrote this in a notebook and told me to type it up and post it here. I didn't see any quotations marks in the story therefore there wasn't a need to put them in if the characters had actual lines and if there was a plot to this I would've give them each their own line. This story was based off of a dream my dad had there's no actual plot to this story I could try to fix this story if you want me to but where do I put the quotation marks at?
I understand that you didn't really get this story I didn't really care much for it anyway but I don't really know how to make sense of the story for you to understand. Anyway I might try to fix this story but no promises. I am currently busy with my Ed Edd n Eddy fanfics I might rewrite this story but no one seems to care for it so I don't know
| Iggy 8/19/12 . chapter 1
Didn't understand a thing, sorry. I can forgive the typos and other words that seem out of place but please learn how to use "quotation marks" when showing dialogue.
| MyNameIsAlexandraRider 6/29/12 . chapter 1
Very interesting story. And this was all based on a dream? Wow
| James Birdsong 1/27/12 . chapter 1
Neato perhaps :)