| Reviews for Mixed Up Lovers |
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PrideViola 2/7/12 . chapter 5Nice story! I like how it's going so far... Wonder what it be like if Shinichi dating Aoko... Anyway keep the hard work! Sin- pride P.S: can you make the words longer? Tkz |
Anele1996 1/28/12 . chapter 5Kaito Kaito, help yourself. Becuse im not going to help you. *evil laughter* Hopes it does not go to bad for them tough. And its Anele-kun ! Anele-kun / Aj-kun (Kun, og ingentig annent vet du. ;) ) Ses po skolen. |
Maruki Shitoichi 1/27/12 . chapter 5Maru: thanks! and great update by the way w Kato: and by the way Rihoko's name here is just made up by Maru*came out of nowhere* Riku: Oi! don't call me by that name, Bakato!*hits Kato with her karate chop* Kato: make me!*stuck tounge out* Maru: oi, oi, who's the one talking here?*sweat drop* well, I think Kaito-Kun will be out of luck until he sees Ran's luck _; Bye! Maru-Chan |
kid-fan 1/27/12 . chapter 4 love it love it love it love it! keep updating i wanna know whats going to happen next :)) please update soon |
Maruki Shitoichi 1/26/12 . chapter 4Maru: yay! Kaito-Kun is here!*hugging (or suffocating) Kato* Kato: Oi! stop hugging me! I'm not my dad!*tries to break free, staring to Riku* Riku! Help me!*giving puppy eyes* Riku: *stuck tounge out* no way! Maru: update please, and if you want to find out who is Riku nor Kato, please read my fic 'Friends or Foes' okay!*signing* Maru-Chan |
cookingnina 1/26/12 . chapter 4ayyye this is good you should make some more |
roxifoxi 1/26/12 . chapter 1 SHINICHI is so calm...SO COOL! OMG MARRY ME NA JEST KIDDING. |
Anele1996 1/26/12 . chapter 4Yay you updated. TwT CoAj-kun |
Tantei-kun 7312 1/26/12 . chapter 3Tantei-kun: Yay writing errors in the summary :) White: Geez what is wrong with you, cant you give it a rest in just five minuts and anyway like you are the one to talk, you managed to write "averyone" in your first story. Tantei-kun: stop picking on me! (*turns away*) White(*whispers*): what a drama queen. Tantei-kun: I heard that! White: oh crap, now I must live with Karate kicks uintill the next chapter is up White(* while emergening from a kick*): well anyway it was a really cool chapter. Tantei-kun: yes it was but I am going to torture this stupid thief untill the next chapter is up, so keep on writing;) ( BAAM!) White: ouch! Tantei-kun: hehehe(*evil smile*) that is whats called a "YOUDAN kick kick against the head" Tantei-kun: looking forward to next chapter. Jannicke: Hang in there white! gotta go (* faint smile*) |
ToKToK 1/14/12 . chapter 3Well i like it really but i really wish it wouldn't turn out to be Shinichi and Aoko pairing cause i am a kaito and aoko fan or would it anyway update soon!:-) :-) |
Maruki Shitoichi 1/13/12 . chapter 3Hm... Shinichi want to see Aoko again (?) just hoped that Kaito-Kun isn't angry at him XD well... just continue the story, BTW what the original name of the story that you read? |
Anele1996 1/13/12 . chapter 3I would like a character, RioluLi. We can taalk details some other place though. So far this story is going great, I do feel sorry for Ran but yet not. What would be acuard was if Shinichi or Aoko said the wrong name to their friend in another chapter...OCH! That would hurt, I already see it. I'mm also gessing that the heist is at Saturday / that they run in to Aoko OR just figgurs out something importent. See I told you I would get a lot off ideas. So I hoope that I get too know if their love is going to be a catastrofe or a happy ending. TwT See Ya! TWCM Tantei Aj |
Tantei-kun 7312 1/13/12 . chapter 2Tantei-kun 7312: Oh no I didnt look for errors. White: Geez, whats wrong with you? A normal girl would NOT look for errors. Tantei-kun 7312: I know but I am not normal(childish smile) White: Well I tried to make her quit, sorry Ri-chan:( |
Anele1996 1/13/12 . chapter 2... Interesting start. I can do a lot with just this much. (evil laugther) see ya next time. ;-) hanjou Tantei Aj |
Maruki Shitoichi 1/12/12 . chapter 2well I WAS just asking, but keep up the good work still can't belive Aoko is falling in love with Shinichi, no way! \(O.o)/ |