Wow I like this!

I really liked it! :)

hi nice chapter...
BTW Dex is 5yrs older than deb, just saying :D

I love these little snipplets. They have one of the most beautiful relationships of any character's in all of television. Nothing can separate them. And you have captured the essence of that in this story. I don't think either could live without one another. Its a very dark and beautiful relationship at the same time. Where one go's the other will follow. I honestly think if either of them die in the end, the other will die too... bitter sweet. Anyway, these storys are great and i cant wait for another chapter!

I hope to see more chapters. These flashbacks are great.

and that makes 4 completely, unbelieveably awesome chapters! :D i hope you are planning on writing more... ;P

Haha, nice :) different that Dex was the one sitting quietly and copping the bullying though, you'd think he'd be the first to slip up... oh well, maybe not. still loving this story!

This story is written really well, i like the pace you wrote at; it makes it easy to follow :)

Aww, that's so cute! i love how Dex doesn't know what cooties are :D

This is sooo good! It was well written and just so entertaining! I loved it :)

The first Dexter fic I've read and oh, that was cute! Like on a scale of 1-10 of adorablity it's defiantly a 10(:

Update soon!

-3 vanirgii

love it!

awe I like it a lot.

Excuse me, I meant chapter three, completely skipped over number two, I'll read it now though.

Hey, this stuff has potential!

But... (and this is constructive criticism) in chapter two, you might consider letting the mother have another way of expressing herself then mere 'yelling'. She's mad, I get it, but either describe that feeling deeper, or don't keep adding the fact that she's yelling.

But for the rest, great, less typo's than I make myself and a good read overall, keep it up!