 Kiwi555Kiwi 4/27/11 . chapter 1 Good start, T. I see that you're trying to make this tie-in more similar to the games than Sonic The Comic- Online did, which seems like a difficult task. Also this is the first story I've read of yours to involve "Shade" Phoenix and Sparky, so bonus points! Only thing is I haven't been able to find your "Timeship Infinity" story, so Amy's green eyes and Sonic's "Chaos sense" are a mystery to me ('Nother thing: I find it hilarious how you gave Sonic's little Chaos radar a title of a pun on "Spider Senses" when Fleetway Sonic was arachnaphobic :D.) I'll try harder to find that, I've been dying to read Shade's story since I first saw him on your DeviantArt.
PS. I know, I know; EXTREMELY late review is EXTREMELY late. Whatever.
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 Rebell 7/21/07 . chapter 11Well, it's been about five years since you've written this 'little' fic, but that's ok... I'm going to assume that reveiws are always appreciated.
First off, it's not a little fic, it's an epic. A very well-written epic at that, and SHAME on people for not reviewing more. Shall we chase after them and threaten everyone with severe cases of writers block?
Secondly, I've never played this game because no one I know has a Dreamcast, and they don't exactly sell them anymore... so I was reading blindly, if you will. And I still thought it was brilliant! I wouldn't know exactly how many deviations you took from the game's storyline but I suppose it doesn't matter, especially because the end result was so good!
Thirdly... did I see the words "Shadow's coming back" at the end there? Can I take it to mean it's possible you have since written and posted a sequel? (If you get another review tonight, you don't have to answer that...)
I loved it! |