Very sweet and your writing sounds just like him. Nice job!

Awesome. Really well done. Love the bit of ordinary made beautiful. And the end about illicit soapbox babies. ; )

Wow you really captured his writing style well.

Oh, I really liked this. You know how to continue with the story and it's a nice, refreshing view of how they'd have continued with their lifes. And the child! Nice touch introducing a new nymphet! Seems like Hum is never going to get used to them.

You've done a brilliant job of capturing Humbert's voice in this, and you've kept Lolita in character. Your vocabulary is also brilliant, and you've caught Nabokov's sense of humour beautifully.

Ah, beautiful! You've really captured something of Nabokov's humour and the hopeless, devoted manner of Humbert's passion. I particularly liked the clothes representing the locations of previous trysts. Great job!