I think you should wrie more. I like it so far.

Extremely cute fluff. Thank you for sharing.

Awwwwwww this is sooo cute!

This is sooo cute :) I could almost cry at how sweet they are :)

I think you really had a nice inspiration when you wrote this. Sad it's this short. I really love:

"How do I look into my heart?" He felt like he couldn't, because he thought that maybe she stole it from him and that's why she made him all those paper hearts - to replace it with.

"I don't know. I just asked mine. I said, 'Heart, do I love Edward Cullen?' And my Heart said, 'Yes.' And then I knew I loved you"

So cute and lovely. Thank you.

You hafta extend it! They are so cute!

I asked my heart "heart, do you like this one shot" and it said "no, you love it, its just too cute" :) Good job ! I just bumped into your profile and its the second piece of work that I'm reading, and I'm already waiting to read all of them ALL at once.

Cute!

Awww! That was soo cute! I can soo see that!

Too cute - I especially love the last sentence. :) This reminds me of one of my distant cousins, all serious and about 10 years old, telling my sister and me all about her friend's boyfriend troubles. How old are Edward and Bella in this story?

Too lazy to log in BUT I LOVED THIS! Too cute, adorable even. more woud be great but I'd understand if other ideas come first!

Awwww

This was SOOOO cute!

I loved it XD

Cute! lol

So cute! I can just see these two growing up together! :)

This was so freaking cute...Wow... I really hope that you'll keep on writing - its fun having them younger !