Reviews for The Deceiver
Alikkatz 8/11/12 . chapter 1
Post more chapters. :)
AK 1/4/12 . chapter 1
I have never seen nor read a single plot summary for 'supernatural'. But I like this story because it sort of stands alone and I can follow it (at least so far). And Jesse sounds so cute! That mean girl doesn't know what she's missing out on :) Your writing is great and I like how you manage to go back and forth between first-person and third-person narrative. Some people can't pull that off (me, for instance) but you manage it nicely. Good job!