nice story, keep it up!

Hi. Once again, great fic so far. plz write more. I love 17 and Marron's cool.

Emu: *Eyes bug out* GAAAA! What happens? WHAT? That was...climatic. Nice writing style. You build up good suspense, yes? Tha is good and bad. As now i am hooked and it is uncomfortable. *Has hook in mouth* Owie. Now i feel bad for fishies. Eeeeee

I just read the first one and it was really good. I was crying through the last part. I'm so happy you wrote a sequel. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep writing!

Ahhhhhhhhhh...... things are heating up!! :D.. You better make chapters quickly! :D..

Emu: WHOO HOOO motorcycle...with Seventeen!!! YAY! Neato story! Me likies! One thing though, could you please have maybe a sentence the says something about Shin? he's cool! Then your story would RULE! not that it doesn't already. hehehe Lunch is scary!0.o ookie! Nice description and tempo. Gaaaa That's all! BYE! CONTINUE SOOOOOOON!

*Bows, bows* HAIL QUEEN VAL!!! THE MOST AWESOME FIC WRITER EVER!!! :D

Ooo tis a sequel! Tis so good Val, but need more! You're writing some right now ne? NE?! Better be because Bchan is very very... very... very... huh... very impatient. Yesss. ^_^ MORE. ....this review sucks. -_-' Sorry. I do better for you later. @_@

Yay. You did a continue, you did a continue, you did a continue. I'm soo happy. It's really good so far. But it'll be even better when you upload the next chap. Soon.
More, more, more.

Thanks

Bye bye
~Bexi~