Reviews for The New York Revelation
chocolatetea21 1/31/13 . chapter 7
Lol. I liked this story. Wish there were more chapters though but I was captivated none the less. Good job
Myra 12/23/12 . chapter 1
I loved it! I especially love your spy like reads. Not many others write them, I find it very refreshing! Awesome!
her illusion 12/3/12 . chapter 7
oooh,nice work! :) "I love these two together. Much more interesting than the canon pairings!" and i have to say i definitely agree with this haha!
Dagger-Seishin 11/4/12 . chapter 7
LOL that kinda hilarious. it seems common in a good way. guy get nervous of her tears thinking it's pain and turns out ot be pleasure or happiness.
tinksauble 11/1/12 . chapter 7
I am seriously head over heels in love with your Draco! Great read!
A Diabolical Angel 10/19/12 . chapter 7
Amazing story, even though it's been a while you've finished it, I read through it in only a couple hours ! You're a great writer and have an amazing talent, don't let anyone tell you otherwise :)

Keep the stories coming !
Hollie 9/30/12 . chapter 7
LOOOOVE this story! Just wish it had been a bit longer. GREAT job! :)
atlashands13 7/17/12 . chapter 7
Amazing fic and mindblowing smut. You're an amazing writer, keep up the amazing work! :)
Parvati48 7/15/12 . chapter 7
Aw well that was a cute end. Hopefully they got the chest to where it needed to go to stay safe. I'm glad everything worked out and they are gonna be happy together. I really enjoyed the story even if Hermione was too much of a bitch sometimes lol. Good job! :D
Parvati48 7/15/12 . chapter 6
I'm so glad you didn't kill Draco off, I knew you wouldn't cuz as you said he's important to the story but it was scary for a second before I realized that. I'm glad Hermione and Draco got their shag in beforehand lol. Hopefully Draco and Hermione get their wands back before they chase Remy. Hopefully they get to her before she opens the chest. Good job. :)
Parvati48 7/15/12 . chapter 5
Wow Draco and Hermione were to distracted and got themselves in deeper crap...hopefully they get out of this one. The beginning of the chapter was pretty hot though haha. I really wish Hermione would stop being a bitch and stop lying to herself about her feelings and just go with it. Oh well, good job. :)
Parvati48 7/15/12 . chapter 4
Lol nice. :) I can't wait to read the smut haha. I can't believe Riley's wife is a crazy psychopath that would do that to her own child, well children if you count the one who already died. This is jacked up and hopefully Hermione and Draco can help save Lily. I like how compassionate you made Draco, it's really endearing! XD Good job. :)
Parvati48 7/15/12 . chapter 3
Doing that on the back of a motorbike? That's hot though now they are even more in trouble lol. Hopefully they can escape this too lol. I wonder when they are gonna set up the tracker thing so they can track Riley and get the chest back. Good job. :)
Parvati48 7/15/12 . chapter 2
Wow that was intense. Damn Riley and stealing what they were sent to steal lol. I wonder who he really is since he stole it out from under them like that. I'm curious to see how they actually got caught though. Can't wait to see what happens next, good job. :)
Parvati48 7/13/12 . chapter 1
Lol aw I like how Draco is teasing her but damn is Hermione a bitch in this one so far. He tried to restart with him and she threw punch in his face, total dick move lol. Pretty interesting start to the story though, I like it so far. Good job. :)
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