Wow. Lots of the distinctive features of Calvin and Hobbes apparent in this story. Calvinball, G.R.O.S.S.

A few funny moments too. Waiting to see how things turn out. :D

Reminds me of an episode of Teamo Supremo. But, good story. I can't wait till the sequel. CLONE WARS 2! I mean you should meet my pals, garfieldodie and Swing 123. Swingy will do a parody of CLone Wars for Star Wars. Please Update.

Oh, it's too good to stop! *waits anxiously for more*

Ah! I need more! *looks* Oh, cool. *notices that there's more chappies* Okay, well, bye. *saunters off to read next chapter*

Oh, excitingness!

Por Hamster Huey!

Hehe. This is funny and exciting. I haven't reviewed till now 'cos...well, I dunno why. :-P

The first pert was copied off of a strip, but otherwise it was pretty good. Nice job man

Hmm... Clone wars. I think that it is interesting the dialogue works well... but its not internally all that the name holds up. The name Duplication problems is more up the ante. In my opinion at least.

TROUBLE!oh my god what a great chappie. i also noticed you used the paint filling balloons idea from the books. good thinking. write more i know i will read more.

hey

it made me think...what is the story of hampster huey and the gooey kablooie? that would be a good story topic. anyway good story. it is still giving me goosebumps.*shivers again*

i hate to be critic but here it goes. i couldn't help noticing that you wrote susie suzie not susie. *bows my head in guilt* like i told you be4 i do not like to be critic. anyways i really like your idea of funny quotes and lines and things from the comik into the story. that is really kewl. take the time traveling quotes and the you-can't-trace-me letter. hahahaha continue. pleez. PLEAZ!

P.S. gettin very good cant wait to read the next chappie.

OMG! wuz gonna happen? i luv calvin and hobbes more than anything in the whole entire world so this is so freaky...goosbumps. i would have never thought of something so horrible. write more plz.

*shivers*

P.S. i am savoring evey chappie. hope the next one is even betta.

*shivers again*

Hm...I can't think up any ideas for the Calvinball game...without making it totally unrealilistic. I noticed a few spelling errors, and the format seemed to messed up, but this is good so far. Continue please and keep up the good work.

'bout time you updated. This is good. No guesses as to who's going to win.

An idea for Calvinball, huh? Well, I guess #5 could trick Calvin into sacrificing all of his points to him, so Calvin and Hobbes hold a time out, and Calvin thinks of a way to gain his points back. *shrugs* It's what I would do, anyway.

I can't remember much from the original chapters because of how long ago it was. Unfortunately, fused paragraphs together, so it was hard to read. So far the story carries on well, innovative with its unique set book timeline. Small parts of the story that are not consistenly updated hinder the initial storyline, so try not to add small segments that have no point in the main or a supporting storyline.

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