Reviews for The Clone Wars

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Wookienator 2005-10-26 ch 7,	abuseWow. Lots of the distinctive features of Calvin and Hobbes apparent in this story. Calvinball, G.R.O.S.S. A few funny moments too. Waiting to see how things turn out. :D
garfieldjonarbuckle 2005-08-18 ch 7, anon.	abuseReminds me of an episode of Teamo Supremo. But, good story. I can't wait till the sequel. CLONE WARS 2! I mean you should meet my pals, garfieldodie and Swing 123. Swingy will do a parody of CLone Wars for Star Wars. Please Update.
E.B. Keane-Farrell 2004-10-16 ch 7,	abuseOh, it's too good to stop! waits anxiously for more
E.B. Keane-Farrell 2004-10-16 ch 6,	abuseAh! I need more! looks Oh, cool. notices that there's more chappies Okay, well, bye. saunters off to read next chapter
E.B. Keane-Farrell 2004-10-16 ch 4,	abuseOh, excitingness!
E.B. Keane-Farrell 2004-10-16 ch 3,	abusePor Hamster Huey! Hehe. This is funny and exciting. I haven't reviewed till now 'cos...well, I dunno why. :-P
luna raddish-ears 2004-09-10 ch 1,	abuseThe first pert was copied off of a strip, but otherwise it was pretty good. Nice job man
Doctor of Writing 2004-09-02 ch 7,	abuseHmm... Clone wars. I think that it is interesting the dialogue works well... but its not internally all that the name holds up. The name Duplication problems is more up the ante. In my opinion at least.
minouminou77 2003-06-19 ch 4,	abuseTROUBLE!oh my god what a great chappie. i also noticed you used the paint filling balloons idea from the books. good thinking. write more i know i will read more.
minouminou77 2003-06-19 ch 3,	abusehey it made me think...what is the story of hampster huey and the gooey kablooie?? that would be a good story topic. anyway good story. it is still giving me goosebumps.shivers again
minouminou77 2003-06-19 ch 2, anon.	abusei hate to be critic but here it goes. i couldn't help noticing that you wrote susie suzie not susie. bows my head in guilt like i told you be4 i do not like to be critic. anyways i really like your idea of funny quotes and lines and things from the comik into the story. that is really kewl. take the time traveling quotes and the you-can't-trace-me letter. hahahaha continue. pleez. PLEAZ! P.S. gettin very good cant wait to read the next chappie.
minouminou77 2003-06-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseOMG! wuz gonna happen? i luv calvin and hobbes more than anything in the whole entire world so this is so freaky...goosbumps. i would have never thought of something so horrible. write more plz. shivers P.S. i am savoring evey chappie. hope the next one is even betta. shivers again
CoolGirl89 2003-05-16 ch 7,	abuseHm...I can't think up any ideas for the Calvinball game...without making it totally unrealilistic. I noticed a few spelling errors, and the format seemed to messed up, but this is good so far. Continue please and keep up the good work.
Dannor 2003-05-10 ch 7,	abuse'bout time you updated. This is good. No guesses as to who's going to win. An idea for Calvinball, huh? Well, I guess #5 could trick Calvin into sacrificing all of his points to him, so Calvin and Hobbes hold a time out, and Calvin thinks of a way to gain his points back. shrugs It's what I would do, anyway.
Sirk 2003-05-07 ch 5,	abuseI can't remember much from the original chapters because of how long ago it was. Unfortunately, ff.net fused paragraphs together, so it was hard to read. So far the story carries on well, innovative with its unique set book timeline. Small parts of the story that are not consistenly updated hinder the initial storyline, so try not to add small segments that have no point in the main or a supporting storyline. - -As long as we have each other, we'll never run out of problems- w.despair.com

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