Hey that was really good. I think you should write a sequel, I want to know what Draco thinks about the letter. It was a bit mushy but I liked it anyways. If you do a sequel, maybe you could have Draco writing a response letter. It would fit in with the whole letter writing theme. Well, just a suggestion. :)

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Dude,Malfoy and Potter are not GAY people!Do I make my self clear?GOOD!

Well written. I like the ending. I hope you do write a sequal.

not sequel. more chapters. i can't wait as long as a new sequel, and besides, more chapters seems more appropriate than a sequel. and thanx for the idea of another story to read, i'm BORED!

aaw! I think you should write a sequal, unattatched to this. Cos its kind of nice on its own, but there needs to be something so we all know everythings ok in the end, happily ever after, fairy tale style. aaah. please?

A sequel, pls...I wanna see Draco's reaction. And I want to see what Harry does after he sends the letter.

Aw, this was sad and sweet. I'll give you cookies if you write a sequel!

This one was inspired by Aylindril...? Funny, I coulda sworn it was that... darn, I've forgotten the name! You know, the one where Harry and Draco get into a fight, then Draco goes and has sex with Blaise repents in the morning but Harry finds out... you know that one? *grin* Well, anyways, this was really, really good and I hope you write another chapter. I can't wait! *nudge* Send me an email, would you, when you update?

In answer to your question about a sequel... One half of me says yes, the other half of me says no. This works beautifully as a stand alone, leaving the reader open to think about what Draco's response should be. But it could also be looked at as the first of two, possibly more in a series. I for one would like to see how you envision Draco reacting, but I do like it on its own. Either way you do it, I encourage you to continue writing, you have a talent for it.

Great story, but this seriously needs a sequel...

I loved it! Harry was completly in character, I can totally see him doing that! The only constructive critism I can give you is that wich you have already given yourself, it was a bit confusing. It reads well, the flow is uninterupted, excactly the way someone would sound if in Harry's position. Now, I've got to go read your inspiration, don't forget a sequel!