My lady this story is amazing. You should have a sequel where they go to marissa wedding.

Nice.

Loved Parker throwing herself off the balcony, Marissa almost having a heart attack, and Eliot simply catching the thief like it was nothing unusual.

And neat to bring back 'the locksmith'. Good character continuation. And that Marissa was smart enough to get the guy checked by the best LOL.

"by blood or bond". LOVE that phrase.

Well done. I look forward to your next!

This was a great ending

Thank you for such a fun and great story!

Mercedes

This was so good! I really want to see what happens with Eliot and Parker's relationship from this story. I know you wrote it a while ago but It would be fun to see how they act now that they are together.

exactly as good as I remembered it! thanks for posting it here. :)

Aww...Parker being friendly. That was great. And a little bit of E/P fluff. Always good. Love the story.

Beautiful! I'm so glad Parker had the presence of mind to talk with Marissa. Great chapter.

Thanks,

Mercedes

I don't know how this chapter could have been better!

Thanks, Mercedes

Yes! That was amazingly awesome!

Thanks,

Mercedes

So nice to get a new chapter every day!

I'm really enjoying this. LOL to Sophie being annoyed at the call-out on having been out-grifted.

And I just connected - "Hyperion Hotel"? In-joke for Angel?

Awesome chapter. Really good emotionally!

Thanks, Mercedes

O God please tell me its Tara lol

Oooh, a twist! Like it.

And Marissa went from 'not sure what Bryan was doing was so very bad' to wanting to bury him rather quickly once she found out he was really cheating LOL. Nice character touch there; people do react more viscerally to personal betrayal than to more abstract actions.

And hopefully Eliot will get his head out of his orifice soon regarding Parker...

Uh oh, jealous Parker and protective Nate... going to be interesting!

' "Er, they do now," said Hardison as carefully as he could.' LOL.

I'm liking how you're bringing out little character bits (Nate's effect on Missy after Sam's passing, Eliot's reaction to Parker's reaction :) about the 'making out' ) on each of them through the story. Not too much at one time; it's well timed.

Still enjoying!