 miroku-has-darkness 2006-08-23 . chapter 5cute |
 Lady Death Cat 2005-05-25 . chapter 5 Very good |
 kimmy 2004-05-16 . chapter 5 great story. very kawii(cute) y cant you tell us i realy wanna kno what happend between the 2 well any way i think i can guess. any way good story loved it keep up the good work |
 CrimsonKitty88 2003-12-30 . chapter 4Yes I've read all the way through it. stupid website wouldn't let me review the last chapter. anyways... your story was incredibly funny and cute. |
 Silver Warrior 2003-08-20 . chapter 6That was just classic what Gohan did. Rushuing off leaving his wife. I think I've seen a fic or two where Goku stayed alive after the Cell Games and did that when Chichi was pregnant with Goten. Oh, that was just so cool. And Natalie is a trainee at the hospital? That's cool. But is that the end of this? The end of what happened to Gohan, Videl, and their friends? Are you just gonna carry on in the fics about Trunks, Goten, and their friends? Either way, this has been a great story. I loved it and I think I'll go back and reread it. |
 Silver Warrior 2003-08-20 . chapter 5If my high school reunion is anything like that, then things will be really, REALLY interesting. |
 Silver Warrior 2003-08-20 . chapter 4Hmm. Videl + homrone based mood swings that come with being pregnant = OH HELL, RUN FOR THE HILLS! |
 Silver Warrior 2003-08-20 . chapter 2Classic Chichi reaction. Classic Hercule reaction. Classic thing to do to the press. Oh man, this is going great! |
 Silver Warrior 2003-08-20 . chapter 1Okay, that reaction is classic. |
 XXX 2003-05-06 . chapter 1 one of the best stories i have ever read.
whoever flames you on this story do not have good taste and don't deserve to know about fanfiction.net |
 Ice Wolf17 2003-04-24 . chapter 6Awesome! All of the laughs were enjoyable. What a great story. Well then, Keep on writing! |
 amailie 2003-03-07 . chapter 6Cute! that was so good! I liked your story!
ellese-chan |
 Steph 2003-03-06 . chapter 6 Nicholas proposed to Nat. That's my guess. Great story. It's Hilarious, Well, for the fifth time I'm going to go through your series again.
Ciao
Steph |
 fuji 2003-02-25 . chapter 1 wow thw new history sound realy realy good! i cant wait . the quotes get me realy interesed |
 Candid Cameras 2003-02-23 . chapter 6Yes a 'PICTURE' perfect ending!
LOVE AND SMOE! |