LOL that was great. I can't wait to read more. Oh and the names of the victims ... velcro, barbi doll, sewage, television, billards and radiator.

Great start, clever puns :)

Lol Barbie doll, and the raiders huh... that's an interesting choice of kids to kill but what did TV ever do to you.. lol I like where your going with this and I hope its either Author,Liz or Casey that's prosecuting this case

Household items. Niiiiiice. XDDD

Vel Crow, Barbara Dahl, Sue Age, Telly Vission, Bill Yards and Ray D. Aider Velcro, Barbie Doll, Sewage, Television, Billiards, and Radiator! Do I win a cookie? Perhaps, some apple pie? Great story! Veryyyy cute:)

Got the puns. Velcro, Barbie doll, Sewage, telivison, billiards and radiator.

No idea who should be the prosecuter.

Hehe, this was so good. Totally had me smiling. Woke me up too because I'm so tired. :) :)

I totally got the puns. Well, at least most of them I think. :) :)

Can I tell you, can I, please? Hehe. :) :)

Okay, here it goes; Velcro, Barbie doll (I'm not too sure about that one),Sewage, Television, Billiards (Don't know if I spelt that right) and Raider (I think this makes sense, but maybe I'm wrong). :) :)

Well, hopefully I got those write. :) :)

Anyway I really loved this and I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon. :) :)

- Gemma. :) :)