Loved it.

Wow, this really is amazing. I love how you show that Toby is conflicted. And speaking as someone who has a younger sibling, you really captured the emotions of the older sibling well. This truly is amazing.

i really loved it! p;ease write more!

Oh my gosh that was AMAZING! And I LOVE Toby/Bay fics You could make a sequel to this but the way you ended it it's not necessary. Great job, though!

Oh God I can't stop crying! Tissue please! This literally made me cryy

OMG, I have no words to describe your writing, it's perfect. I was drawn to it from the moment I read the summary. Please, don't ever stop writing, you're so damn gifted!

I loved this! Your fic makes me want a big brother. *pout* Ever since that scene in the midseason finale where Toby tells Emmett not to treat his sister badly, I've decided that Toby has to be the best big brother ever. And this oneshot is certainly contributing to this. ;)

Okay, so i am NOT a crier. I don't do the touchy-feely, let's all hug, Oprah kind of thing. But this? THIS I loved. You are an amazing writer and I did cry...as much as I can...but the point is it was fantastic and it really reminded me of my older brother because even though we fight, and give each other a hard time, we're brother and sister and pals to the end. And you really captured that. It was beautiful and I hope you get many, many reviews :) You deserve them.

Rae

I was crying by the second paragraph :(

Aw! What a sweet story! I wish I had soething like this. Not a switched at birth thing but a brother that cared about me so much! :)

God I cried reading this.

loved it! i liked the focus on eyes. it was good :)