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KHLostEmpress 5/28/12 . chapter 7
I'm forever forgetting the Digimon (and Cody) when I write my stories too. There's just so many characters!

Great chapter. I have guesses about things, so I can't wait to see if I'm right!
crestoflight3 5/26/12 . chapter 7
Okay, I'm failing at this code! I know it will make sense when you reveal it, but until then, I'm a failure. Oh, well.

I would comment angrily about how much you love to torture the characters and the reader, but I already knew that, so that doesn't surprise me anymore...
KHLostEmpress 5/5/12 . chapter 6
I love Izzy, so a chapter full of him is fine by me. Hopefully, he gets out with that prophecy, cause I have a feeling that's going to be important. I can't imagine why though... ;)
crestoflight3 5/5/12 . chapter 6
Yay! Action! I love how you portray Izzy...you get his character out perfectly! And Sora! And all of them, of course...

And again with the classic cliffhanger...
dx1118 5/5/12 . chapter 6
Yay! New chapter! Can't wait till the next one! What will happen next? Good work as always. I enjoyed 'A Captive Light' and this story has me hooked as well, so please keep writing. The characters are true to the tv show but they also seem more realistic and emotional, as do the digimon. I also like some of the ideas you've added or would like add to the plot. It just makes it more exciting.

I must know what happens next! Will Devimon be defeated? Will TK and Kari get together? Will Ken make an appearance and if so, can the Digidestined trust him after he kidnapped Kari, nearly killed TK and let Kimeramon loose on the Digital World (I'm assuming that still happened in this version)? Will Matt recover? Plese don't leave this story unfinished!

One other thing, since you have changed some of the plot details, could you please add something to the start of the next chapter that tells us if anything different happened between 'A Captive Light' and this story? Did the DD try harder to defeat Ken after what he did? Did Ken try any other evil plans that weren't in the show? Was Magnamon still the one to defeat Kimeramon? I'm assuming you haven't mentioned any of this because everything's mostly the same as in the show, but it would still be nice to know what you think could/should have happened. If not, I'd still like another chapter soon anyway. You're very good at this. Thank you and (again) I can't wait to know what happens.
merryb 5/5/12 . chapter 6
Thank you so much! Of course you ended with another cliffhanger. That just makes the story more exciting! Once again, thank you so much!
KHLostEmpress 4/16/12 . chapter 5
Wonderful chapter. Can I just say that "don't die" is one of my favorite phrases to send people off with (especially small boys who seem to manage to injure themselves in the most unlikely ways possible sometimes...but I digress).

I loved how Izzy just went off on his explanation. Just so Izzy-like of him. And seriously, can TK and Kari stop blaming themselves for every bad thing that has ever happened!

Can't wait for more!

And tell Vincent I said good luck! I'm sure it will just be the best two years for him (though it'll seem like forever for you). I hope he's going somewhere foreign. That always seemed more exciting to me! Though Stateside isn't a bad thing! And I'm rambling again...sorry.
crestoflight3 4/16/12 . chapter 5
Yay, no evil cliffhanger! That's so strange...I don't know if I like it or not. Oh, well.

I love how they went back to the Koromon village! You're doing a lot of references to the past in this story...the theme park, this, Sora's going to Digitamamon's restaurant...is there a theme I detect?
Genun 4/16/12 . chapter 5
I miss you too. Thanks for posting this before I head out to Brazil.

As for the chapter, there were one or two gramar or spelling mistakes, but writtnig on a bus isn't all that easy. My favorite part was the first two sections. T.K. really is taking it hard, as is expected. But Kari is being so kind. I found it really cute.
KHLostEmpress 3/10/12 . chapter 4
The chapter was really good! But now we have to deal with TK being all angsty for awhile. Oh well...
Genun 3/10/12 . chapter 4
I'm glad your midterms went well. I just hope Matt gets better soon. A coma can't be good for a person. Lesson learned for the digidestined. If you are getting recurring nightmares, tell someone. It is never a good sign to have recurring nightmares. One part I liked was when joe was acting flustered about calling his brother or not. Joe, always worrying, even when he knows just what to do. I hope T.K. doesn't beat himself up too much. Its not his fault the writter enjoys tormenting the characters :D

Great chapter, but we want more!
crestoflight3 3/10/12 . chapter 4
Here is your review. Since you asked so nicely.

I'm starting to get kind of worried about Matt here...I don't trust you not to hurt a character! I know you would! But you need to upload again...! I want to know what will happen!

Okay. There. A review. It's not as long as I would like it, but, well, it'll work, right?
DigiDespairheart 3/10/12 . chapter 4
I SHALL REVIEW! (I sometimes review at story's, mostly because my English isn't that good. But this is worth it :D) 14 alerts with no reviews... That sucks. Because I'm one of them I shall review :).

Oh my... That was so sad. Poor TK. If Devimon is really back he must be scared that Angemon dies again. I love the way you describe TK at the moment. But I have One question, do the other digidestined (Kari, Davis, Yolei and Cody) know that Angemon died once?

Can't wait to read more! It's already an great story dude.
Kikenouryoku-kei 3/10/12 . chapter 4
Kyaaa, thanks so much for updating!

I freakin' love TK being in the spotlight!

Please update soon? :)
Spottedleaves1 3/9/12 . chapter 4
Im gonna think that Matt is err controled by the gears or just a little insane?

/ that is in the enxt chapter xD

i like this story, please keep on updating it its fun to read :)
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