You certainly have started off in a big way. This was very enjoyable.

WOW! I really enjoyed your fanfic, and I would like you to continue your saga. There are many things I would like to see developed. Keep it going!

Very exciting story! Pls. keep writing! I'm really enjoying it.

I just read this whole piece in one go on my way home from work and now I can't wait for another update! Your imagination is wonderful, I adore some of the things you have in here. Your writing is at a very high standard and makes this work a true pleasure to read. Keep going. You have a fan for life in me. Thank you for sharing and I'm very much looking forward to see what you'll have our favourite elemental couple do next.

Best wishes

Lillibet x

Chilling and very interesting.