So sweet! I love the way you expanded on Ron's feelings during one of the most romantic parts of the DH book. It was in the middle of action, and I always wish it had been more detailed. Good job!

Nice examination/interpretation of a brief (but important) scene from the books.

I really liked this, Wordy! This is one of my favourite moments in book 7, and I really like the way you interspersed canon-text in with Ron's thoughts (that's a technique I like to use a lot in my fic writing, too). You really capture the charm and AWWWWW-ness of Ron and Hermione's relationship - also one of my faovourite pairings! Good work. :]

So, I really like this piece! Great job, Wordy! It was a very cute little moment, and I loved the catalyst of the kiss. It was very clever. Also, I loved Harry's interruption; it added a happy, funny moment to an otherwise bleak moment.

Honestly, I don't really have any constructive criticism to give. It's not quite canon-compliant, but that's not a criticism.

Great work!

So, this alert arrived in my inbox. And even though I haven't read fanfiction in months, when I saw it was short and by you, I went for it. Wordy, I loved this! You did such a good job adding the Ron point of view to the scene JKR made; I like that you don't depend on the dialogue/actions she already talked about. And your characterization of Ron is wonderful. The part about him forgetting how much breath it took to snog made me laugh out loud. So cute!

Also ... I'm pretty sure I started a Missing Moments challenge sometime in 09. Which this may well have been for, so that's pretty cool too :D

Awesome oneshot!

Aw, I thought this was very cute. I love Ron and Hermione even though most people think it's the worst couple ever - they just belong together!

Anyways, very cute, short little oneshot. I enjoyed it very much.

-Allie