 LaurChan 5/11/02 . chapter 1 hmmm- cool! i like the p.o.v. but- the line "even if i have to fight your God" scares me even though thats what Duo would say to someone. y'know- i should write a fic where this girl wont stay from Duo despite the...and...yeah. i like this fic tho *_* good job! *_* |