Uh oh! Is Peter not really Walter's son? Or what have you done?

Great chapter. Peter is torturing himself with his dreams again...and he's keeping mum about whats going on, which never bodes well.

Wonderfully written! Can't wait for the next part :D

Wow, what an AMAZING chapter. The beginning felt so right, so very real, so it came as a complete shock when it turned out to be a hallucination. And following up on that with Walter's electrifying reveal about Peter's conception, Brandon dabbling in things he has no right to and Nina deciding to open 'Pandora's Box'... simply inspired. I don't think I've ever gotten this kind of head rush from a fanfic.

This is just the kind of stuff that I need to get me through the next three weeks. Can't wait for the next update.

Oh, there's so much to love about this chapter...

Peter and Eliza turn me into a puddle of goo. Guess that's what dreams are for these days... And then it's so chilling...

I can see Peter being so intense and focused - do the math.

And finally, I love the conversation between Walter and Nina, and the authentication process at the end. I remember those days, too!

As always, a great chapter in a compelling tale. So proud of you!

IT'S BEEN A WEEK SINCE YOU'VE UPDATED THIS AND IF YOU DON'T DO IT SOON I AM GOING TO BURN YOU. OR SKIN YOU AND MAKE YOU INTO SHOES.

I CAN'T STAND THE DISAPPOINTMENT OF NOT HAVING AN EMAIL FOR THIS STORY EACH MORNING.

PLEEEEAAASSEE.

okay so peter is a clone? and newton and brandon are activating him?

I think Olivia should kill Brandon.

*sniff* Wise Walter... utterly perfect his talk with Olivia.

I LOVE this line - "with madness comes a very special kind of wisdom"

You capture Walter so well. I especially enjoy the way that you've portrayed the different facets of Walter - sort of what we're seeing now on the show, I think.

And you brought back my second favorite baddie! Thomas Jerome Newton... up to no good.

It's fascinating, I'm loving every minute of it!

OH MY GOODNESS! THE SUSPENSE! NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE :D

Your writing is so fluid! Good job!

IT'S SO PERFECT.

Azamara.

You are officially a genius, in my books!

This made me cry. It was so powerful!

I really enjoy how you have introduced us better to Astrid and her family, and Astrid's relationship with Peter. I think the show should show more of that. Keep writing, it's beautiful.

It's perfect.