|Reviews for Play By Play Offside Outtake|
| cloudiekp 1/6/12 . chapter 1
Oh, poor Esme. She was totally stalkerish and kind of creepy but she wanted Edward to love her...sad. And she felt forced to run to the jerky Carlisle. What a mess. Thanks for sharing this outtake. It's great to have the background!
| anitabonita2413 1/6/12 . chapter 1
My heart broke for Esme. She was so young and tried her best to capture Edward. I guess in the end he was really focus in what he wanted and it sadly wasn't her. I would love to have know how he really felt when he found out of Esme passing and finding out about Edward the way he did. Oh well I guess I'll just picture him thinking about Esme and what had become of her after she left Chicago. Thanks for sharing this beautiful story.
| Crazybee3 1/5/12 . chapter 1
Oh boy, I'm excited for more -whenever that may be-.
That was great :) And sad..
| strangevisions 1/5/12 . chapter 1
dis waz wierdly non-creepy considering d apprehensns..intrigued lik hell.
oh, n i feel so bad 4 Esme, dis happens 2 so many gurls, not d preggrs parts of-course, n it juz sux :(
| marianasgirl 1/5/12 . chapter 1
Amazing! Nice to see Esme's point of view :)
I'd really like to see an Edward Masen point of view when he finds out Esme had his son and realizes why she found him in chicogo, it would be amazing :)
| BethMasenCullen 1/5/12 . chapter 1
Poor Esme. What a horrible situation to end up in because of some choices soaked in alcohol. I'm going to have to go back to Offside to see what Edward Masen said about how he eventually found out Esme had a baby that he fathered. My heart hurts for them all and I wish Esme could have been more honest about why she traveled to Chicago to see him. Thanks for sharing this with us, love!
| Jessi Cullen-Norrington 1/5/12 . chapter 1
Loved this. I had always wondered about their back story.
| Maplestyle 1/5/12 . chapter 1
I feel really bad for Esme in this! Edward Masen was a bit of a jerk. Then again he didn't really know her.
| kaygou 1/5/12 . chapter 1
Oh if she only knew...
| bklover08 1/5/12 . chapter 1
Hmmm, sad sigh! This is so very sad in so many ways! That desperation that Esme feels and the confused young man, unsure of what has drawn this (random) woman to him! And of course, as you have written, it is not the end but the beginning of a very sad story! Well, I do like that the background is spelled out here, and I sure feel sorry for Esme, for all the reasons that are written here and for her grief and loss in her marriage to the rigid man who is Carlisle Cullen! ;)
| biblepam 1/5/12 . chapter 1
Poor Esme, but she was really past the borderline point of stalking...moved herself right into Edward's apartment.. geeze.. thanks for posting.. laters girl.
| Draenator 1/5/12 . chapter 1
You can see how Carlisle would get all twisted over Edward Jr… I wonder if it developed after the circumstances of her death and the revelation at Esme's funeral, or if it was always there subconsciously and her dying was the trigger for it to surface?
| Danie Carly Cullen 1/5/12 . chapter 1
I really hope this is the beginning
| 2old4fanfic 1/5/12 . chapter 1
you're just posting this to throw us off the fact that Beh is in a coma (or concussion) and Ehd's dreams have been dashed like a dinosaur trapped in mud. Nice try with the slutty Esme, but no dice. She was a tiny bit stalkerish there, eh?
| TheRugbymom 1/5/12 . chapter 1
Wow! Nicely done!