YOU FINALLY UPDATED! :D I've been on and off with reading the story due to my busy life and the times I'm reading them xD

Anyway, onto the story...yes, during it I was just waiting for Luneth and Ingus to kiss. Every line I'm saying to myself, "WILL THEY JUST KISS ALREADY!?" XD But they finally did. And Luneth got all mad about it Dx Seriously, Luneth, he didn't have a choice! And I'm sure he didn't mean it! (I'm pretty sure he did ;D)

And then when the two ended up sleeping in the same bed :3 Again, at this point, I was waiting for the two to kiss as well. :3 Yes, all I could think about was kissing in this chapter ;.; xD Anyway, nice job! And thanks for mentioning the community ;D Spread the love and all that! xD

Yay, finally a new chapter (just found out there was one :3)
Sooo glad they kissed. hehe. It was about time in my opinion :D
Hope you will continue with the next chapter soon! :)

You're converting me to this pairing with each and every chapter! Also, you've made me want some tea and cake. *goes off to boil kettle*

Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaah
Äntligen en update XD Så... jag tyckte inte att Luneth och Ingus första kiss skulle vara så... ah, unexpected? XD Men det var roligt, och jag älskate Luneths reaktion. Nu undrar jag vad Luneth ska göra med Ingus :d

Jag hoppas att du ska vara klara med kap. 6 snart!

Amazing :D I love that story so much :3 So glad you uploaded this chapter I waited so long for this :')

Heeeey :D

I'm sorry that I didn't replied your message and that the revie did't come very fast, but my Internet is dow so I couldn't read anything. So I have to use the Internet in school and so I have so much time.

We chaper was as wonderfull as ever and I look foreward to the new chapter :D

Oh I have to go now my teacher is right behinde me ;)

LOL Refia, you smart girl (or yaoi-fan? XD)

This is getting cool :d

Waaah! Awesome! Oh my God you even put me there! :D Oh my oh my I feel like a celebrity x) This chapter was awesome no matter what you can think, you know? I'm so thankful I'll immediately get going with mah story now so wait for an update very soon ;) Oh my God this is so awesome I'm so looking forward to the next chapter :D

I read your story again! And thanks for mentioning me in the authors note XD I cannot wait till chapter 5!

Oh, how I am loving this! X) I've only read half of this chapter, cause I have other things to be doing (hint,hint!) Haha, your grammar in this is pretty good. If you ever want me to check your grammar or whatever for ya, just drop a message ;) It's pretty good so far, update soon please!

xx

This is amazing! You write really well! I'm jealous :P

Might not be super fair that I'm reviewing this buuuut your stories really deserve more reviews ;)

Like I told you already, I really like the story so far and I'm really curious as to where it is going. And well, you know everything I had to tell you I already said xD

Oh! What I didn't tell you; I really like the jest about Luneth's name xD

Major thanks for the kind words btw 3

I'm a so dump child -.-

I clicked the second chapter and started to reading without to read your comment and I was like - Didn't I read this chapter before ?

But we aren't here to talk about my foolishness :) So you have to tell me WHY THE HELL IS LUNETH ACTING EXACT LIKE ME ?

I mean the thing with chocolate cake and coffee. I think I found my lost brother x3

I wish Ingus all luck on eart because every time he meet luneth, he is just runnig away.. but one day Ingus will be faster than our cute thief and he'll never let him go again :D

Isn't that a nice story ?

Looking forward to the next chapter :D

At first I've to say, that I'm not perfect at English so I can't judge about grammer or spelling errors, but I think there aren't any of them! I can read your story without any understanding problems. It is well written and it's about one of my favorite pairings.

I tell you if you aren't gonna write soon the next chapter I'll punch you :)

I'm looking happily forward to all new chapters and if you ever need some help, you can ask me !

hmm...unless you can add more drama to it..I'd say end it at the next chapter...

BUT! If you add more drama like Luneth seeing him again and thinking that Ingus is Sara's boyfriend and then he's all confused and all of that stuff plus some action, you could make a pretty long fic...

I haven't read a FF3 fanfic in a long time lol, but I think this is a great story you have going so far -