This is good, short but good, i quite enjoyed it. Do you think you'll do a sequal to it, like an answer or something, i don't know, but a sequal would be nice...and again good story.

The formatting is little odd, but over all it's ok. L-sama? Any way related to DeathNote L? lol...

I like it. Personally dark is good and he is crazy. DoD is one of my favoite manga the anime is really different from the mang, but they didn't destroy it to bad.

I am a new writer and reviewer so if I am a little late its still cool I hope.

Sherabo, (')

No one is ooc I love this! Are you going to make more? Its so well done. _

Nice use of the song. For once, I read the lyrics while reading a story. It was good.

O_O thats so sad... T_T if muraki were mine i wouldn't leave him... *sigh* (damn i'm begging to be abused...)GOOD FIC!

hey! I really liked this story alot! Poor Muraki..He's so cOOl! ::sobs::

n/e ways, great lil fic adn keep it up .

I really, really like your fic. About the only negative point I could mention was the shortness of the fic. Don't you think there should be a sequel/an answer? I, for one, would like to read a sequel.

And yes, I, too, like THAT guy. (I wouldn't have chosen his surname if I didn't like him... v)

Also, I wonder what Tsuzuki's reaction to that gift/Muraki's appearance/strange beahviour would be...

(I honestly do not think that he has NO feelings whatsoever for the good doctor... (Then again, that could be my overactive imagination speaking, no da. ;;)

Please keep up the good work!

Eeeeeeeeeeeek! The combination of Muraki and a song that cheerful and wistful is flatly... creepy. Ow. Kudos for imagination on this one! Write more!

I liked it! Is there going to be a sequel? _

Whaaa - Muraki-sensei is so creepy! Is there more?

i think that was a cute storey keep up the good work!