 jaypat 5/25/12 . chapter 22This is just brilliant! Favorite Edward! I love this guy! Just adorable! Alittle sad your J didn't work out. But I know what you mean by dodging that bullet.
Making sandwiches for the homeless... I literally was laughing so hard. So many moments I would just laugh or had the biggest smile. Bella's parents... LOVE! Orgies! Lol! The gas. The homophones and Edward spelling it out. Too friggin funny! There THERE!
Ah. Young love. It's the best. The innocence, the guessing, lack of communication, hormones, the drama and making out a lot! :)
Another great story from you! Putting ou on my favorites! |
 Dinx 5/15/12 . chapter 22So, I'm on my phone, which i hate to review from, but I had to leave you at least one since I've been so wrapped up in the story and failed to do it on the others. OMG! I absolutely loved this. I'm so sorry I wasn't able to pre-read for you. Real life was being a real bitch for a while. Things are getting better now, though. I'm so glad it worked out for you, regardless. This story kept me up til the wee hours of the morning and then I was reading during lunch and breaks at work. Lol. I'd love to see more from these two. They're absolutely adorable together. You know I love your writing... and you. So, again, sorry for the lateness. Thank you for sharing this with us, though. It's definitely one of the best things I've read in a while. You totes made me crack up, smile, swoon, and grin like a loon. Parts were pretty hawt, too. *fans self*
Anywho, I love you lots. We need to catch up soon. XOXO. |
 Joanne110 5/14/12 . chapter 22I heart this story so much. I'm so glad someone recommended it at ADF. Great job. Thanks for sharing. |
 jro.jro.jro 5/14/12 . chapter 22Oh man. I just plowed through this whole thing in one sitting! It was so amazing and made me wish I'd had a boy like that when I was in high school. I love that you didn't gloss over the, erm, nastier parts of being a teenage boy. But at the same time, I totally fell for this Edward. Every single thing you've written has been amazing and this one was no different. Thanks for sharing your creativity with the rest of us - it's always a blast! |
 1853kaz 5/13/12 . chapter 22That was a joy to read, seriously. Your pen name is perfect! Thank you for the laughs. :) |
 1853kaz 5/13/12 . chapter 20It's fun, too easy to stick around with Edward, see what comes out of his mouth next. :) |
 1853kaz 5/13/12 . chapter 17Love it :) |
 1853kaz 5/12/12 . chapter 16Yep, time out, a little fun.. We all need it :) |
 1853kaz 5/12/12 . chapter 14That was great! Teenage kisses, wow. :) |
 1853kaz 5/12/12 . chapter 13Progress! :) |
 1853kaz 5/12/12 . chapter 12Ahhh, regrets. :) |
 1853kaz 5/12/12 . chapter 8Why didn't you listen, Edward? :) |
 1853kaz 5/12/12 . chapter 7Dang. I guess you have to try it to be sure it's not for you :) |
 1853kaz 5/12/12 . chapter 5:) |
 1853kaz 5/12/12 . chapter 4Too funny! :) |