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FoxxieFantasy 11/25/02 . chapter 1
Lol...so interesting...enjoyed it...keep writing _
aurora 9/2/02 . chapter 1
Well tehy certainly drove the point home. I don't know who DAar is, but I'nm thinking he's a cat-man. WEll written and in a good setting. I can't weit to see what Van and Daar to to Hitomi and Merle. Good job!
Tonia 5/27/02 . chapter 1
HAHAHAAAH! Cool idea! Never read an Esca fic like this one before! Keep the ideas coming!
paige goldgriffen 5/21/02 . chapter 1
sup? loved dis. thought it roxked. u got me reviewing, when i won't 4 any 1 else. :p
Elise 5/18/02 . chapter 1
Escaflowne? I saw dah show on Fox couple times. Seemed really kiddish. But then Ah heard about it being cut and stuff. Well, I like your story. *Nothing new. ;)*
Drake 5/14/02 . chapter 1
Hey, bud, haven't talked 2 ya n forever! Been on nonstop go here. Van sounds hot! I like this, and it was really funny. :P Need some guy on guy action, but it was good. ((I think I'm just prejudice. Haha...)) Keep writin, otherwise I'll hunt u down!
Lady Rouge 5/11/02 . chapter 1
Honestly, I've read a couple of your sister's poems and fan fictions. ((Is she really your sister?)) She's decent, but I prefer you. :o) I think you have a lot more emotional depth in what you do.

This fic was classic! I was quite amused by how Hitomi and Merle got a sort of 'revenge' on the boys. I do, however, have a few suggestions. There were a couple word repeats, some other punctuation errors. Nothing too major. You described Hitomi and Van's outfits so well...but what about Merle and Daar? Why not get more indepth into their personalities and clothing? How did they dance? What were they thinking? Ect all.

This was a very cute story. When will you update your Harry Potter fic?
penwalker 5/11/02 . chapter 1
i loved it lil bro! that was so freaking kewl! - and i'm even happier that you wanted to use one of my own characters! hitomi and merle were so perfect! lol. i loved how they got back at their bfs...and van sounded gorgeous...and daar was as silly as ever. - *booty dances* go aidan, go aidan, go aidan! whoop whoop, go aidan!
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