I liked it :) you should write a sex scene with Thor on the bottom zagixthor

2 things awwwww and lol

AH HAHAHAHA! I love this! I can't even get over it! i'm not a big Yaoi fan, but this was just too good!

Nice! There are some spelling and minorly out-of-character issues (Zagi's a little too...awkward/easily upset, I guess, and I don't think Thor would be quite so harsh with Tiz), but nothing I'd really worry about, and considering it's your first story, very impressive . And as you can probably guess, I love the pairing ;)

If you're looking for ZagixThor, I've written one :P Chapter 2 just went up today, and I'm working on Chapter 3 (hopefully it doesn't take as long as the second one did XD)

lol I agree, there should be way more stories then three about this amazing pairing.

I enjoyed yours though. Gives much to the way of imagining it.

Thanks for this read.

I you're looking for more, I haven't found much but I trust you've read alone with you by wilderkaiserin.