Reviews for UnKnown
Weird'sMyName 10/11/12 . chapter 1
This is not bad at all. I love the mystery!
Cabba 10/11/12 . chapter 14
Ooh! Something's fishy! I can't wait for the action! How long is the story going to be? Is there going to be a major twist? Who's the spy? (I know you're not going to say, but it's worth a shot.) Update soon.
Cabba 10/11/12 . chapter 12
Poor Bryn. (oh, she's gonna kill me), let's hope they reach land soon. A little Lukyn, Silena/Derek and some jealousy between Hannh and Bryn, huh? This is getting good.
Cabba 10/11/12 . chapter 11
That was real sweet! Do you have a name for Silena and Derek? Silerek (Okay, that sounds like celery), Derina (That sounds like ballerina).
Hannah's alone. Is she the spy? Or is that too obvious and someone else is going to betray them?
Cabba 10/11/12 . chapter 10
Poseidon's really nice. I'm glad he's on their side!
Cabba 10/11/12 . chapter 9
No! What's happening to Bryn? She's the leader of this quest, kinda.
I can't wait!
Cabba 10/11/12 . chapter 8
Bryn's dreams suck big time. I feel so sorry for her. (Don't tell her that!)
I like Lukyn. It sounds good. I can't wait for the quest!
Cabba 10/10/12 . chapter 7
This chapter was more about Bryn, huh? Good job. I love her personality.
Cabba 10/10/12 . chapter 6
Almost forgot about Capture the Flag! It's gonna be spec-godly-tacular!
Cabba 10/10/12 . chapter 5
The prophecy sounds dangerous. So it's completely normal, eh?
Cabba 10/10/12 . chapter 4
Awww! We got another mini-Percy and mini-Annabeth here!
Cabba 10/10/12 . chapter 3
Teenage trust issues! This is getting good. Can't wait for the training and then the quest!
Cabba 10/10/12 . chapter 2
Hah! That was good. I enjoyed the conversation.
Cabba 10/10/12 . chapter 1
This is a good story. I've come across treasure!
S.A.Ness 10/8/12 . chapter 14
I really like your story but I hope you don't make Bryn a bad person. I really like her and her relationship with Luke
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