Please note that your fic is in violation.

Entries not allowed:
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.

I suggest that you delete this, and upload on a different website.

Thank you for your time.

explodinghead
Member of Eliminator

Holy... I just lost half my brain cells. This would be unbearable without your commentary.

I can't believe no one has reviewed this! Anyway, your commentary was hilarious! Was this girl smoking something when she wrote this story?