Please update soon! I love you're story, and Christine's character.

I can not wait for the next chapter! Very good story I hope for more to come :)

I am loving your story! I'm so glad that you're taking it slow and building it up! I hope you update it soon:)

I love it can't wait to read more please update soon

Best story I have read on this section, I just love Chris, she is so strong and funny, I think she is like a lion heart, she is very brave, and she is also smart, I think Edmund and Christine would be great together, I just love this story so much. I love Jenn and Cody too, the three of them are just so funny, I have a feeling that Chris element is fire, because she is strong and doesn't take anybody's shit, and she has a good heart. Hope you update soon.

I can't wait to see Edmund's mumbling and how he can't find his words when he sees Christine :))) God, I'm really glad you're back :D

Please update!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! It's been a few weeks and the suspense is KILLING ME!

Thank God it was just a nightmare! I mean: when you're in a nightmare - what can give you hope? What can makes things better? A thought? A feeling? A person? ambition? -oh, I'm philosophing :)) So, for my mental behavior: keep writing! I beg you :)

:))) Aladdin and Jafar-that was hilarious! Chris is just so simple-minded. She says things before she thinks:))) That's pretty awesome. It always surprises you. And when Cody said that trees are moving- that was funny too. Holy crap- the story is funny:)) Love it:)

"I think there is something wrong with them though. I have never heard them so quiet for so long though." And there it is." - that part was sooo funny XD I just like the way Christine is saying what she thinks. That must have been a quite scene with the 3 of them arguing in front of the kings :))

You definitely deserve more reviews for this story. I love Christine- her strength, uniqueness, and kindness make her a great character. I'd say work on fleshing out Jenn a bit more, and maybe include Cody a bit more, too. They've been a little MIA the last few chapters. Overall, if you're going to have an abundance of characters in your story, just make sure they all get some face time. I'd also recommend more interaction between Christine and Edmund; she jumped into the jealousy phase pretty quickly.
That being said, your writing and grammar is very good, your chapters are well-rounded and a solid length, and you've created a unique and interesting story :) I look forward to an update!

Great story so far! (The only thing I noticed is that you sometimes get "then" mixed up with "than" and "too" mixed up with "to." You could also probably cut back a bit with the commas if you wanted to. (Just a suggestion though.))
Christine's comments and reactions always have me laughing or thinking "way to stand up for yourself." I'm glad you're taking things slow between Edmund and Christine since they've only been in Narnia for a couple of weeks, but I'm happy that Chris is finally realizing she may like Ed as more than just a friend. This chapter had me so shocked when I read about what happened to Apollo, but thankfully it wasn't actually real. Now I'm wondering if the nightmare was some kind of premonition or maybe that figure from the beginning somehow getting in Chris's head and messing with her mind. Anywho, keep up the good work :) I can't wait to read more, especially after this chapter!

Hahahaha! I SWEAR, christine (did i spell that right? oh well) is my new roll model. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter

i thought it was great. oh and YAAAY CANADIANS! i happen to be canadian