I absolutely love what you've done with this story! I've been reading it for quite a while. I hope you churn out more stories like this one!

Happy again to see another chapter! Keep up the good work!

Ooh. Great chapter apart from small spelling mistakes.

I'm in love with this! Please don't give up on writing this! Really kept me interested from Chapter 1-21! Excited for more!

Don't do it, Tor! Not by yourself!
This chapter got my system into the fight-or-flight process _

Thus begins the dramatic music O.o
Fantastic chapter. Well worth the wait.

Ah, all of the armor and swords making their big debute ;) So easily forgotten in the written world.
The war draws near and I'm still very excited for the next chapter _

Dum dum-dum! Fantastic chapter, as usual _

And thus begins the avalanche of overgrown weeds and poisonous seeds meant to down the Heros of the Land and Beyond. Wonderful chapter :)

Skip over a part in the story?! Never. I read beginning to end, no skipping. Tis dishonorly ;)
I'm glad I didn't though, even though I've played the game countless of times, this was like exactly seeing everything that I've done in the game via words. Everything important in the game is there and still giving a hint of your characterization interpretations. Marvelous work

Purely beautiful, this chapter. It made me realize that my going off to college would make me miss my family. I really feel like I'm in Tor and Roberta's place. The emotions are onderfully captured.

New Chapter Faints!

Always a pleasure to read a chapter from this story. There's always a turn of events (whether good or bad) that keep me on my toes.

LOVE IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE! THERE R NO STORIES ABOUT NEOPETS THE DARKEST FAERIE!

Right more! :D