|Reviews for Getting In|
| mrskaz453 8/7/12 . chapter 10
Wow...I really loved the ending of this chapter...
Nice story... I like Misha/Ham... Mike is an obnoxious jerk...
Hope you update soon...
| Javanyet 5/20/12 . chapter 9
I thought I had this on Story Alert but it turns out I didn't. It looks like you've re-written some. You're really weaving a great story here, and the characterizations and the careful development of their relationships is impressive. Things like this are ruined by rushing, and you are not doing that. You're letting the story take a natural course. Great stuff, keep it coming.
| Javanyet 2/4/12 . chapter 7
I am completely sucked in because what you have set in motion could literally go anywhere. It contains a variety of different sub-plot possibilities without seeming "overcrowded". The canon characters are well represented; it's obvious you "know" them well or you couldn't bring them forward into an original story and new situations successfully, and you are doing that. And there's just enough backstory and lots of little grace notes in the action that reveal character really well.
About the last word in this chapter... "pluck" seems a little lightweight, considering what Misha has done so far, and it doesn't seem (to me) to be a natural piece of Tyler's internal vocabulary. Maybe "backbone", which implies attitude as well as courage? As a closing sentence it does work very well. Yeah, I'm word-picky. But I can't wait to see more!
| Javanyet 2/4/12 . chapter 4
"Misha thought of all the things in their former lives that so easily robbed them of joy."
That says so much in a single sentence. I am really loving this story. Time to read more...
| wiccawoman 1/22/12 . chapter 5
Great Story, I would love to see more!