I love how Albus is super cheeky writing about Snape when he's supposed to right about Dumbledore. I also really liked the bit about Gryffindors trying to claim Snape as one of them and how Albus tells them to back off. And the greasy hair jokes, classic and always funny. Good job!

I lurve this.

I really liked your story. I don't know if you have any desire to do so, but I think it'd be awesome if you'd write more about Neville's book that you mentioned...The Vanishing School. I think that has great potential if you're in the mood and have ideas for it.

Well played. Full marks :)