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J Luc Pitard
2009-04-30 . chapter 1
It's all in the perspective, isn't it? Or, for Sarah, it's all in the denial. I imagine this to be while she's still quite young, since Toby seems to still be a baby and she's still surrounded by her stuffed animals. Give her some time and a few more of those dreams, Sir Nibs and see where that gets you!

Funny thing how we want the mansion and the perfect life, but sometimes you have to look around and say "These are the days we'll look back on with a smile." We had a moment like that some years ago during a dark period in our lives. My sweet one and I felt so lucky to still have each other and our great kids, despite the difficulties. We kept repeating that we were the luckiest people in Hell.

Dream on, Sarah...
Closet Chocoholic
2008-10-13 . chapter 1
I like it! :P Stopid ending, though. Why do you wreck my fantasies? *pouts*
Venus Smurf
2006-11-21 . chapter 1
Wow. That was awesome. Are you planning to continue it? I can see it making a wonderful story, though it's awesome like this too. Well done!
SP777
2004-11-18 . chapter 1
THAT was unexpected!
Cat, Avatar for the DCG
2004-10-05 . chapter 1
Again, interesting. Y'know, I had always envisioned Jereth as a tragic villain of sorts. A dream, or nightmare, created to love, created to lose. But your very fey Jereth also captures my imagination. I havent read the long one yet- I'm going to go throught the RK fics first, but rest assured that when I do, I will try to leave a comprehensive review at the end.

Ja- Cat
Lady Dragon - Jammchra
2004-05-19 . chapter 2
I would also like to see the rest of this story. Does sound intriguing by the way you started and left a beautiful cliff hanger.
Phoenix Flight
2003-04-23 . chapter 2
What an incrediblely original and /fun/ story!!

Please, please update! I crave more!
Meamiko
2003-02-12 . chapter 2
Hey are you gonna keep going or what? I really liked the start! Ja!
Michiru-san
2003-02-03 . chapter 2
I really like this story, please continue it!
YamiHoshi
2003-01-08 . chapter 2
Write more or I'll be forced to write you nasty reviews.
DarkFire77
2002-10-27 . chapter 2
I will hope to read more soon. Is very interesting the story. ;P
Mevneriel
2002-09-01 . chapter 2
cool idea for a story. I look forward to your next chapter. Keep up this wonderful work.
AbyssDemon
2002-08-31 . chapter 2
where's this going i wonder? Hurry with the next chapter!
AbyssDemon
2002-08-31 . chapter 1
*Grins* lol- now this is something i just have to finish! Perfectly and wonderfully evil. I love it!
dawn1
2002-08-30 . chapter 2
Please post more! I'm really glad you decided to continue. This sounds like it's really going to be good!
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