Hi

WOW! that was a good story.

I liked it. Explains a lot about why Lyle is the way he is, poor sick little puppy that he is. LOL

You kept skipping between tenses, but otherwise, it was a very good character sketch of Lyle.

good.. sadistic in a way but an excellent portrayl of Mr Lyle

WOW! I really enjoyed that. I think it was very good.

It was different; and there were a couple errors; but otherwise, it was a very nice job. A good portrayal of Lyle.

That was really good. It kept a nice, straight-forawrd feeling throughout the whole thing (Something I struggle very hard to do, and can hardly ever do). I liked it a lot. It's hard to get into the mind of Lyle, and that was probably a portrayal. Lioness

Pretty job.