So, what's Jake's problem - hm?

Seriously, you ought to continue this tale, make it into a series. Daria and Jane's continuing mis-adventures ar college and so forth.

That was amazing and painful at the same time. I loved it so much. My aunt is gay and this showed me a new side to what she may have gone through. Thank You

I really enjoyed this.

This was a great piece of work and I must say that you caught the angst of one trying to come out to a spiteful family masterfully. I hope to sometime in the future read more of your work.

I just wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed this story. I think that you handled a topic that is controversial with sensitivity and insight that staued true to the main characters.

Character's were very well written. There was one part that seemed kind of rushes, really out of character, or not quite smooth enough, was when Jake found out about daria. Well that was my opinion anyway.

Good story, and a great ending

FEEDBACK: *claps* That was an amazing story. You did an AWESOME job on portraying what it is like to go through that kind of situation. I definately think you should writer a chapter two, I'd be very interested in reading it. Contact me if you wish...to discuss feedback from one who understands. :D

This was a really amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it.

WOW! Wonderful! Azazing! Great! Simply awesome! This is definatly on my faveorite stories list!!! You should write more Daria stories! In conclusion ladies and gentalmen of the jury....

Great!
Wonderful!
Stellar!
Amazing!
Fantastic!

TWO THUMBS UP!!!

FOUR STARS!!!

MAKINGS FOR A SEQUEAL!!!
(hint wink nudge

~*~Serena Dee~*~

*smiles softly at Jane and Daria then glares at Jake* bakayuro = Jake

I think this story was wonderful. You are a talented writer and very acuratly caputured the characters voices and emotions. People reacte all sorts of ways when confronted with sudden stressors and there is no way to predict those reactions. You did a masterful job with a sensitive subject and I commend you for it.

It was a great story but i have one complaint.
Why bother putting a disclaimer telling some close minded dumb a$$es not to read b/c it has homosexual themes. screw them.
let them read it and take comfort in the fact you just ** them off and wasted their time all in one

Failure?Surely you jest!If anything,this story is a brilliant success.I was especially impressed with that scene where Helen kicks Jake to the curb,and the general premise of "Out on Vacation" as a whole is an intriguing one to say the least.

WOAH! who woulda thunk it! Jane Lane GAY! that's kinda , um , wierd! Wow!

that was beautiful. i love how it ends with a disfunctional resolve. things are different, but better. it's perfect