Oh nooo, now I really like Davy Jones and I know that he's going to die, oooooh please don't let him die, let them have a happy life as daughter and fishfather, pleeeeaaaase ;(((((

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I got swamped in homework. I wonder if Jones is gonna try to break up Jack and Ari? And what is Jack gonna do when he finds out the truth of her father? Will Ari be angry when she finds out Jones lied to her? Or will she she be excited she has a mother that is alive? Too many questions, not enough answers!

i have to read the rest of this book you have to update it soon! please

Wow. That was awesome. I loved how Ari reacted and the way her father was overprotective of her. Please up date soon for a young dreamer.

Oh my god is this good!

Really good chapter! Will Jack be in the next one? Hope so

SWEET GODS! ALL THAT IS NEEDED NOW IS A BUNCH OF LIGHT-SABERS AND WE GOT A POTC VERSION OF STAR WARS! SWEET!... And your welcome to the 50th review! Jack should be beaten with a frying pan for what he did to Ari!

Wow! This chapter was awesome, I didnt even miss Jack because it was so good xD

I have fallen in love with your beautiful story that you have created. I must admitt that this chapter had me in suspense throughout the whole thing, wondering will Ari finally realize who her father is? Will she accept it or deny it? Please up date faster so I won't be tossing and turning in the night waiting to see Ari's reactions. Once again, awesome story and please do a young dreamer a favor and up date soon. :)

i love this story but you can't leave it at a cliff hanger like that you really need to update soon, i love your stories by the way.

I love love LOVE this story. It is easily my favorite Pirates fanfiction here.:)

Amazing work! I loved it :D

:D :D . ! I cant wait to see Ari's reaction and see when jack finds out

loved it! can't wait for friday!

"Luke I am your father" was never said in Star Wars. Ever.

Good story though.

Anna