| Reviews for The Noble and Most Ancient House of Black |
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Guest 12/30/12 . chapter 12 Please update, pretty please? |
Mathlover4 11/6/12 . chapter 12Love your story! Please update soon! |
EmzThehexNinja 9/30/12 . chapter 12I love this story, I can't wait to read the next chapter :) |
Birdie Lo Green 9/26/12 . chapter 3Oh I'm so glad you included the Marauder's unveiled conversation between the twins & Remus & Sirius _ but "I envy James, you know, that he didn't have to see us come to this." *crying like I stubbed my toe* The guilt seeping from between the lines! Wonderful writing as always. |
Birdie Lo Green 9/26/12 . chapter 2Moony? *sighs* That's better. You had me worried there. |
Birdie Lo Green 9/26/12 . chapter 1-Sirius called him Lupin? *clutches heart & makes whale noises* Also I cannot stop smiling... "I have a life too, you know. I might have found myself a woman or something." Remus said, defensively. "Well, have you?" Sirius prompted. "Don't be ridiculous." -"I got in a decent amount of practice after your incarceration." Remus admitted. *wipes away tears* Oh and may I suggest a better ending for this chapter... 'Sirius didn't end up going to his own bed that night. He crept in to the second floor guest bedroom and slipped under the covers with Remus.' JOKING. This was so on point. Your dialogue is perfect, as are you my dear. |
CreativeWriter 9/25/12 . chapter 12 Damn you Dumbledore! |
AshNox 8/28/12 . chapter 7Still loving this. I think you've conveyed Molly well. Her priority is her children and keeping them safe. |
AshNox 8/28/12 . chapter 3I have just read the first chapters, and I am loving this. I actually find it very hard to imagine what Sirius must be like after coming out of Azkaban and everything he went through. I think you have done a really good job with this, while hinting at Remus's life in those years, that no one knows about. And I loved the way you wrote Fred and George being all impressed because they were meeting the Marauders. One thing I wasn't sure about. You had Sirius say Remus had 'no where to stay' which I noticed because loads of people seem to think that Remus was living with Sirius because he was homeless and poor, but at the end of Goblet of Fire (which is only a few months before this?) Dumbledore tells Sirius to 'Lie Low at Lupins' so Remus had a house in August. Hope that's not too nit-picking! I love you're story and am off to read the next chapter. :) Think I might just like to think Remus was there just because he wanted to be! |
TheWalnutQueen 8/27/12 . chapter 4Such a good missing moment! I love Ron and Hermione as a couple, and I think we missed so many moments between them throughout the series. Loving the light humour, too :) |
Dinky Dau 8/23/12 . chapter 12Due to the fact it's 0:25 in the morning this isn't going to be a very intelligent review :3 On the other hand I'm still up because I couldn't stop reading your fic, must count for something! Well I wanted to say I'm immensely enjoying your fic and hope you will be able to update soon, you left us with bit of a cliffhanger I'm afraid |
The Scratch of Quills 8/20/12 . chapter 12I love your story. Can't wait for more. |
Lupinesence 8/20/12 . chapter 12Cool chapter, I'm rather cross with Dumbledore at the moment as I know he's gonna ban Sirius from going outside now completely. I don't see the harm in going to out-of-the-way places so he doesn't go stir crazy and I don't think he fully appreciates how much the incarceration at Grimmauld place is killing him. Great to see this back :) |
Kazo Sakamari 8/19/12 . chapter 12Ahh...I don't know if you mean to do this, but this chapter really made me hate Dumbledore. I know he means well, but honestly... Anyways, thanks for updating! Please do so again soon! |
MuggleCreator 8/19/12 . chapter 12Ooh! Dumbledore knows... Is thsi gonna be canon all the way...? I forget... |