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| Reviews for Hana |
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   Sharpay Evans 11 5/31/12 . chapter 12Take your time! |
| Sharpay Evans 11 2/17/12 . chapter 11 Oh it's over! |
| Karona BHM 2/17/12 . chapter 11 AWWWWW HAPPY ENDING *sniffle* great job on finally finishing the story ) I loved it! |
| Cutterpillow 2/17/12 . chapter 11 "Looks like he's going to kill us with bad jokes." I mumbled. AWESOMEST. PART. EVER. This is the last chapter..? :( But wait, I've read something about a sequel though... I'm looking forward to it! xx Cutterpillow |
| Sharpay Evans 11 2/11/12 . chapter 10 I am surprised Aladdin didn't freeze! |
| Karona BHM 2/8/12 . chapter 9 oh man i love aladdin fanfics. and i'd say for your first you're doing a really good job. i can't wait to hear what happens in the end to hana and prince ali. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Cutterpillow 2/4/12 . chapter 9 Last tip. If the scene focuses on Aladdin more, then maybe you should write another scne that focuses more on Hna,a not just having her blindly nod, or agree, or witness. At the very least though, make Hana say some... additional comments. That's it! Please update soon! xx Cutterpillow |
| Cutterpillow 2/4/12 . chapter 6 Oh yeah. So you've fixed the spacing. That's good. I like how you made Hana not know about the microphone. That's awesome. (from chapter 5. I forgot to put it there.) :) xx Cutterpillow |
| Cutterpillow 2/4/12 . chapter 5 So far so good! I'm loving Hana. not very much sue-sh. But, try to play with her more... give her a little more dash of personality. It's a good thing you made them into paragraphs, instead of having them aligned left. Here's one more tip though. try using double space when you're editing your document, so it will appear longer. Do the double-spacing after you've uploaded the document here in . xx Cutterpillow |
| Sharpay Evans 11 2/4/12 . chapter 9 This is an awesome story! |
| grapejuice101 2/1/12 . chapter 7 i like it. good job and update asap plz. |
| Sharpay Evans 11 1/25/12 . chapter 6 This is gonna be fun! |
| Storyteller222 1/25/12 . chapter 6 Eh not bad but I have seen better |
| Storyteller222 1/25/12 . chapter 5 You need to work on your spacing |
| Girlsrule2424 1/21/12 . chapter 4 continue it's really good. i can't wait for the next bit |
