Aww! This is cute! I would be embarrassed if I were caught kissing at work, too! But, that's just me!

I can totally see this happening. And, honestly, I can also see the heroine's name being Alice. I mean, the five boys are all based around a deck of cards, with Ukyo being the wild card/Joker. It's certainly plausible!

It was so cute I loved it!

First of all, I really liked the way you described Shin's and Toma's relationship. Also, the interactions between the characters are really well written!

I'm glad that you decided to add Orion too, I love this guy! He really is an awesome character, I hope you'll use him again if you decide to write more.

My friend, this was brilliance! The characterisations were spot-on, the inclusion of Orion and his master was a pleasant surprise! There were many points I felt like I was at Meido no Hitsuji on the day these events too place!