uh oh. Hot!

I am at a lack of words to say. It's not hard to guess what words are floating in my head!

NAKED and FLIRT XD

Really awesome!

XD I love him calling her "darling" and "sweetheart"! It makes it all funnier!

and now Val is just drop dead gorgeous! Very good looking and very intelligent XD what else?!

awesome and intense.
The death was VERY well written. It warmed my heart.

I particularly enjoyed that Xellos could change Filia's mind so easily. He angered her to make her forget about her mourning of the death, and even joked in order to make her forget that she did not believe him in the first place!

Val is so cute XD
Cool story

Hmph... :D

XELLOS! you man ** lol i dont think it right he did that to filia with that ** but any way great romantc veiws soo please tell me him and filia nhook up and stay toether this time plz plz p-lz!

I lost track of this story several years ago, and now during a recent "come back" of this fandom in my life (may have something to do with Salyers Revolution, Evolution-R (=^^=) I remembered this story and decided to see if you ever finished it. And am I ever pleasantly surprised to discover that you're still continuing with this story! Your dedication to continue (and hopefully finish) this story is to be saluted and it is most certainly greatly appreciated!

I've always thought that this story had one of the most interesting futures for my favourite Slayers couple. Also, let me tell ya, you most certainly have created the most *delicious* sexual tension between Xellos and Filia that I have *ever* read in a fanfiction. (truthfully, I had hoped that you may have come to a resolution to that when I went looking for this fic ... but it seems as though the sweet torture is continuing (=^^=)

I notice that you haven't updated since July and I don't know how often you were updating this story before your last post, but I do hope that you plan on continuing this; after seven years of keeping with this story, it would be a shame to quit now (=^~=)

Excellent job, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for this story! (=^^=)

Thank you for giving me a really good story to read. My husband was kind of worried that I almost missed a day of work because I was reading. Xellos feels so him but also human, so like my hubby ;) I LOVE you story, please go on :D. I wish I can express better, but English is not my native language and it is 6am, so I need to get ready for work and get the "mini-Xellos" ;) ready for school. My baby is just a carbon copy of my husband.

Errk
I'm sorry I took so long to review this!
It was sitting in my inbox for a while until I was in the mood to read it again.
And by that time I had to reread everything. XD

Xellos needs to snap out of it! Although I can definitely see why he feels the way he does.

Looking forward to more. :D

Kirelle *thinks Think* She the one Xellos ... uhm when he went into the .. was it the Cellar? I think so. something like that. I remember that I had some observations and thinkings about her in one review... but i can't remeber what it was ^^°
Ok that's was to be expected... long time not read. but neverless a traitor is a little spice in the soup^^

Amd about Filia... it seems it is happening what I hoped XD she will take a step and I'm sure Zelas will help--
Now Xellos will be shaken to awake, Physicallay *grin* Mentaly und emotionally *yay*

I think(hope the next chapter will not slip my notice^^.
SeeYaSayo by
Ryu Zero Rei Baura Alapa Diil no Zerodyme Cupura Pa Azarak Vile Lua Darog

Xellos developing is interestimg... to be honest it reminds me alot of puberty and in a way it is one.

His Psyche is bending in cyrcles and spinning.
I like his deepest emotional motor, his love for his family.
And Val is perceptive he himself has many problems to think about in the moment-

AND now Kudo for the brilliant work of mixing and switching serious and Funny in this chapter. Like the treehouse scene... ** Room *laugh**cough**Laugh*
Or the last scene between Zelas and Filia XD

Hm I wonder how wold Xellos react when Filia decide to make a step forward... when he has no possibility to escape. It would be pure teror for him,his own fears would be able to shred his astral being at least it seems like it would be possible. My tipis ore that this visions are the Key to Controll himself...

AH well see^^
seeyasayo

So nicley^^ I laughed heartily ^^ I mean the scene before the Portal where Zelas gave Val a butt-slap
A jealous Iyzeka *giggle* nice to imagine in color.
The Matrix room was a nice idea
and about Xellos being so flippant... i can understand him, when you are confused, angry at yourself you are easily this way.

I see another smooth reentry in the second book. It's restartng at developing a pace, like the most books do^^
I really like it^^

(I hope ou're are happy tat i rebegan to review)^^
seeyasayo

I liked Filia's POV as a Prolog to the second book.
Now I remember and re-realize how good you writing about emotional thouhts was.

And also nice to see the re-arranging bond of Xellos and Filia, ok this time only from Filia's ground.

Wanna read wanna read^^ I'm off to the next chapter.^^

OKAY I'm back!
Conichiwa Ukchana ^^° long time not "seen"- and my english is a bit rusty... and my memory also. Which means It is hard to remember what happened in the past "few" chapters.
I apologize for not reviewing and eading your story... but one big bright shining moment threw me off balance ^^° and until now I was not lead back to your story.
(Ok I'm honest, the new slayers revolution serie git me fired up again^^°)

SO NOW, I hope my reviews will still be welcome^^ (sadly I believe it will take some time until my reviews will get so detailed as before)

It was again, after such a long time, euphoric to read^^ I was happy-

I loved the funny scenes when Xellos woke up, Iyzaka and her antics were lovley.
Also I liked the kissing scene and as alwaysI LOVED the way the inner tumult of Xellos was displayed his memories his desires he don't want-
Quite interesting but fitting when you've read the entire story is what Zelas taught Xellos not to use Torment for simple joy.

I wonder abou Val, he more and more seems to get a ... "problem" with Zelas. Nothing to serious^^ but it's good to see Zelas get the other a bit "shaken" in diferent ways.

Another good passage (okay everything was good, okay?^^°) was the description of Xellos return, how he was unused to his complete body and how he needed to reremember to properly use it.

So that's all for the moment, ... *stealing to the next chapter*
seeyasayo by
Ryu Zero Rei Baura Alapa Diil no Zerodyme Cupura Pa Azarak Vile Lua Darog

P.S.: Many Typos are due my Keyboard -.- it's swalloing sometimes some letters... it seems to prefer the g ... mostly)

That's right Filia! Go get your man!(or should I say Mazoku) Despite it being short it clearly gave me a inside look at filia's thought process and emotions. It's great that she's thinking about using sex-appeal. I can only imagine how that's gonna turn out. Keep up the wonderful writing ^_^

~ jadehaku

Five pages that fit well. I highly believe if you added more it would have interupted and stilted the flow. It's really well written and I think it was wonderful. Sorry it took me a few days to get to it, my internet has been down for a week and a half, and I just got it up yesterday. (Stupid ATT) Anyhow I'm so happy to see you posted YAY! Sometimes I envy your writing style. Your story is pretty much the only one I look forward to in the Slayers Fandom anymore. Kudos on this bit. It was brilliant.