Lol i would love to see how he father teases her when she come home before morning when she's supposed to be at a sleep over and blushing as bad as she is . . . ahh just the mental picture is funny . . . and i think she does owe him now he did try to fix it for her. she should have at least said thank you

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Kat

VERY cute! I enjoyed this!

It's funny and romantic at the same time!

3 that's a story I wanted to read.

I think that this a very believable way for them to have their first kiss, the one that Ayano was conscious for any way. Kazuma can be such a pain sometimes...I really liked this one.

Awesoooome. this pairing is so cute!

thanks for the good read!

loved it! For once, Ayano and Kazuma were more or less in character, and the story was well written and spell checked. Good job with them!

LOVEEEEEEEEEEE. I think this story was really well done, ah perfect! Awesome job as always!

Aww

*Simple And Clean-Kingdom Hearts*

I loved it!

One thing I absolutely need to say is that you seem like you know the characters so well. In my opinion, you don't get to know characters perfectly unless you made them yourself. Not just this fic, but most of the fics that you write have zero OOC-ness in them. (Jealous face from Dark Phyre) It's inspiring and seems kind of impossible at the same time, if you know what I mean. Your writing always makes my day and I'm so happy to see that you're still writing fics... especially about Ayano and Kazuma... :D It makes me happy. ;) Nice work, once again.

-Dark Phyre-

What a wonderful and intrigueing story! I absolutely loved the depth in your writing and also how you pursued the personality of the characters nicely.

Another great story! Keep it up! Your one-shots are the best!

-AznAnimeFreak4life-

i like it alot...keep making more stories with ayano and kazuma

Very good story I must admit. I also liked how you captured Kazuma's personality. It IS really funny to see him teasing Ayano and her blowing up/getting annoyed.