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Story for nemo would
Like to hear about it

For your first Finding Nemo story, this was certainly very well-written! I could just imagine this happening for real. I hope you write more stories like these. I had fun reading this.

that was cute i liked it!

Danggit Nemo! I love you but you couldn't have waited five more minutes? xD Awesome story, it's so adorable.

I find this story intreating, and that both of them are very much so in LOVE! but besides that, the story was very well organized. (I Really Like It!) (:

I usually hate humanized ones, but this one was surprisingly good. your great at writing and id love to see more of your work!

adorable man id like readmore;)

My favorite part was Nemo.

I also liked the use of onamatapeia. Or however it's spelled.

I would've liked it better if Flo was in it though. But not Deb. Just Flo.

This has to be one of my favorite fics on this entire website! Soo cute!

Loved the story it was so cute

You did a wonderful job :3

Omigosh! I love this! It was sooo great! Thanks so much for writing this! XD

Please tell me you're going to write another human Dorlin story? You're really good at it. :)