 Lady Razorsharp 1/30/12 . chapter 2This was very sweet-both of them. Dom certainly had his hands full, didn't he? |
 millarayen 1/26/12 . chapter 2Un capítulo muy nostálgico pero bien resuelto en el final. Me pareció muy real la última parte en que no le cuenta nada a Cait.
Buena historia! |
 Riabhach 1/23/12 . chapter 2Wonderful chapter - eating the reindeer *giggle* that almost had me spitting water on the computer! :) |
 OldSFfan 1/13/12 . chapter 2Beautiful second chapter. I love it. Thank you. |
 Ms. Anonymous 1/13/12 . chapter 2 Sorry, but I can't imagine String as Santa. He must have felt like he was getting interrogated by those kids. Very cute story, and looking forward to more. |
 airwolf addict 1/13/12 . chapter 2loved it!
and loved santa's explaination for not eating meat ] too funny.. hope to see more new stories soon |
 Elanquest 1/12/12 . chapter 2I loved the second chapter. I was expecting something overly poignant about the angel with the broken wing and Cait and String's first Christmas together, but got this instead. Loved, loved, loved the part about Santa being on a diet and String's frustrated explanation on why Santa didn't eat meat. I liked his explanations whitout falling back on the standard "I'm just one of Santa's many helpers" line. It's also a great way to get String past his obligation to Dom to keep up the tradition to a point where he does it for his own reasons. Keep up the great writing. |
 robertwnielsen 1/12/12 . chapter 2Aww...Joseph sounded kinda cute! :) Loved the chapter (and the whole story), especially Caitlin's confusion at the end. Great job, as always. :)
Robert |
 Maria Thorne 1/10/12 . chapter 1Good to see another story from you. I hope there's more to come soon. |
 mkitty 1/10/12 . chapter 1Nice to see another one of your stories. Very well done as usual! |
 OldSFfan 1/9/12 . chapter 1A glimpse into part of the story too rarely explored by fan fic writers, the interaction of the two orphaned boys and Dom. A moving addition. Well done. |
 Ms. Anonymous 1/8/12 . chapter 1 Poor guys. I really like stories about String and Saint John re-bonding, maybe because they never really got to in the series. I wonder if String still has the angel. Great start and I can't wait for the next update. |
 Riabhach 1/8/12 . chapter 1Lovely fic. A very touching scene. |
 robertwnielsen 1/8/12 . chapter 1Very cool (and believable) story about a Christmas after the Hawkes' parents died. Love the interactions between String and Saint John, with Dom, as always, providing the voice of reason. Definitely a favorite.
Robert |