I have been loving this so far! Rent head!

Hey keep on updating, i need to see the development in the next chpts

love it tons, update when ya can

Keep updating this!

I liked this dialogue heavy chapter, it was written well, but take your time with the next one.

Update more! Id like to see the perspective change in the next one, going from Lins to Marks, to see their thoughts on everthing now that they finally meet normally.

Had to read through it all, and I gotta say Fantastic. Lin sounds like a pretty cool chick. Now that she's recovered, hope to see more of her character come out.

I'd like to see where this is heading, as well as how the group gets along with her in the next part. Consider me a new follower

Nice update, do more!

Great chapter! Update soon!

I wonder if Xiou-Lin is already growing loving feelings for Mark after being told everything. Was a good read, post more soon.

Well that's nice of Mark, and Collins, to care about her like that. All the dialogue was great, hope to see everyone's reaction once they all meet her.

I like this, curious to see where this is headed. Keep it alive!

Interesting so far! Update soon

AWESOMEAGE! Update soon