I really like this last chapter, Darthy. It's sort of tragically beautiful.

You are always putting an interesting perspective on things. I wouldn't have guessed that Unicron sees himself as the savior of Primus, but such a perspective would put his anger at the Children of Primus in a new light. Very provocative.

Ah. I see you subscribe to the "Macaddam was once one of the Thirteen" theory. Very interesting. The adventures of Macaddam and the Fallen would make for a really fun comic series for super-hardcore fans. I picture them being like Rorchach and Deadpool. watch?vG39GgvCjTZs

Very nice short story. You bring up some interesting ideas. I think you came up with a clever way to meld both the book and the movie endings for DOTM. Maybe Megatron could be repaired, especially if he was seen to right away. And without his own team to help him, he'd have to rely on the Autobots to do him that kindness.

Nice work.